Angel Eyes

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Paparazzi (The Biggest Fan of Your Life) on Saturday, 13-Jun-2009 14:15:08

Angel eyes that shine so birght
You pass by my and bring delight
To see them glisen and see them gleem
Open them up they are more than what they seem
The beauty within only gives me a glipse
Daer I keep staring for if I don't than I shall miss.
Though your eyes cannot see what is around you
What I see is more beautiful than anything that could ever soround you
Your eyes
Only your eyes shine with a magnitude of great mysterious beauty
And for that you have capitivated my soul and left my heart out to dry. The the sun will never reach you on a visual state. I see you eyes and a kiss I will take.

Post 2 by Daenerys Targaryen (Enjoying Life) on Saturday, 13-Jun-2009 14:34:52

I like it, but you should have checked your spelling before posting.

Post 3 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Saturday, 13-Jun-2009 18:42:52

Damn right Bella! I absolutely love the poem, but some of your spelling's atrocious! Other than that, love it!